The Spectator's Prospective Inspection

"I'm Terios." I quickly told him. He smiled at me. "I'm Maurice, and this is my mom, Regina." He spoke. Her mom, Regina looks at me. "Nice to meet you, I hope you and Maurice will become great friends and dormmates." She said. I just smiled and nodded.

No, this is all wrong.

knowing your root is very paramount as an African

Now that I think about it, I didn't really take a good look at the boy's look did I?

This book has what it takes to reach the top.Quality: CheckConsistent Updates: CheckLikeable protagonist with clear flaws which can be fixed and developed on: Check.I must admit I was very impressed by the starting chapters. All that’s left is to maintain this quality and consistency.

I love your writing style and how easy it is to read. As a writer, the best way is to show and not tell the reader and you did exactly that. Great job, author!