The Spectator's Prospective Inspection

If i have one thing to say about this novel is that the cover is quite cute that all cya i hope i can hit 140 character i wanted to just word but like using character can increase my count

Here as a friend to the author. I may be biased coz I want to help him out, but I am trying my best to be critical. Coffee calls it "literary metafiction" all the time but I call it "magic mystery" for its attempt to bind fantasy with mystery together, specifically detective fiction.Each and every chapter, the plot thickens and more mysteries are waiting to be uncovered. Good book! I recommend it for mystery lovers who want a tinge of fantasy. Or the other way around, lol---Writing Quality: 4 - Unique linguistic skills. You know the author has passed his grammar and has studied how to write fiction. Exceptionally good at transitions! A bit nerdy though for the tattered references. From Marvel to nonfiction about chaos theory to anime I can't tell them all!!!!!!!!!! - Coffee likes X-Men and Doctor Strange.Stability of Updates: 5 - Has plans to update daily and then some, I can assure that.Story Development: 3 - Downsides! I understand its literary fiction, as he says the pacing is more dragged than normal. But I'll be frank and say it has an unhealthy development after Memento Memori (catchy chapter name, I like it!) The direction its taking doesn't feel like it will go back to the problems of Mikoto Arakawa, the person who is introduced as the main heroine. I'll be waiting thoughCharacter Design: 4 - Characters are built throughout the novel. Some characters aren't given love though, like introducing one at the start of the chapter only to not appear in the following chapters. The Light Mage rival who's named "Kuroko" (black child), for example, where? - Has a memorable sense with names. Shirayuki, the protagonist, means Snow White. The twins Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi are based from the Japanese gods of sun and moon. The Seven Gods might be hard to figure out but when mentioned they are the shichifukujin (seven fortune gods). World Background: 4 - Magic school in modern Japan. Mages are a different race of people separated from Humans. Mages and Humans are enemies. Simple. It only becomes complex when you consider individuality but I think that's normal.

If you want sth unique. Sth new.. This novel is not for you. Just a cultivation novel, with many face slapping and cliches..............................................................

I enjoy the unique twist on the reincarnation genre that this novel does. The MC reincarnates as a white lotus and I find the evolution ability she has to be very interesting. Unlike many reincarnation novels, the main character reincarnates to a time after her death. I find that most reincarnation-revenge story brings the MC to a point before they had died and they use their past life (now future) knowledge to accomplish their revenge. What I like about this novel is that the MC does not know who her real enemy is exactly nor does she know their motive. This creates a sense of mystery that makes me wish the author can do a mass release. It is truly a shame that the author is human with a real life and things to do and not a robot.

A great idea turned into an assortment of poorly written side stories................................ ............................. ............................. ............................. ............................. .............................

The book is great, although it's my first time reading a book that has to do with history,I mustn't deny how well it is written 😎Keep up the good work

Dai Mubai said "come closer I'll tell you more about him. Teacher Zhou is a supreme attack beast spirit master, back when he was just a spirit king himself he beated up all the other level 60 and over spirit kings all by himself. His spirit essence is Strength of the Golden Bear."

He channeled another fireball and threw it against the wall, he wanted to grab a few mana stones before leaving.