I have mixed feelings about this book.story is above average but compared to other cooking novel it's not good. main problem of this story is 8 year old mc with parants whose brain is dead.everyone reacting positive when seeing an 8 year old working ,some parents even rebuking there children because they don't work at same age.no one care he us going to school or not. every one viewing him as adult. if author make him atleast 18 I can read novel without damaging my brain.second problem is story is very fast paced.fell like commen wishfullfillng novel instead of cooking novel.
This story is promising. The way the author lay the imagery and the structures are on point. The pacing of the story is fine. And the author did a good job as I could feel what the characters are feeling. Great work! Looking forward to more chapters!
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Fantastic imagination and character designing is on pleasing level..!!All should definitely read this story because it is full of super twists and turns..!! Author should be appreciated for this fine work..!!
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