it can be found that I do not often review or comment on the stories on this app by clicking on my profile name. however this book has peaked my interest and is very well written thus far(as of the time I'm posting). the only reason for the low rating for the updating stability is because it is still new(57ish chapters). I do wish that the author will continue to update and that this story will eventually finish since there have been too many stories that have a similar protagonist that either are dropped or do not have a concrete and satisfying ending. now this part is to the author. I think that you are doing fantastic and that the story seems to be very well thought out and written. I will continue to read as long as you update and I do not want you to take my comments above as me placing any pressure on you. my wish is for you to do what you are comfortable doing and if that means that you have to drop for any number of reasons I hope that you remember that I think that you have done a fantastic job thus far and are indeed one of the best I have found on this app. I wish you all the best.
Luke/Night's character is pretty relatable. The way the story prolongs is at a good pace and as a novice writer, the concept and the arc of the story is very fascinating.
This novel is more like a Diary of events rather than a story. It starts off with the MC already having experienced reincarnation, evaluation, and expedition into danger. You are dropped into him just finishing his venture into a demon forest only to have him go back into another a chapter later. All the standard problems that would usually take 20 to 50 chapters had been condensed down into quite literally 2 to 4 chapters.by chapter 5 I was already questioning why I was reading this. Although the premise is good and the quality of the story isn't subpar you are basically given no character interaction outside of major events.At 16 chapters in I still barely feel like I know this MC. So much is glossed over apparently 2 to 3 months passed in the story but I've only seen a couple of days worth of events tbh.The week long CD for his ability doesn't feel like a burden at all since he doesn't experience anything outside of it being on CD apparently. He makes money like it's nobody's business and survives dangerous encounters like they were a water balloon thrown by a toddler
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Wow, I like how it started in the middle of an out of this world battle. It had set the tone for the story. I also love the writing style. It clearly depicts the scene, capturing you right then and there. :D I highly recommend this novel. READ IT :) It's worth your time :D Great job author-nim :))
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