Got to give this 5 stars.The author is so much good at explaining football matches. It like you can see the game happening while you read.The story is about Kazuki got a system that allowed him to train! In sleep!The pace and progression of the story are absolutely great!
I was actually enjoying it some what before I saw him stay in the trash school just because of a ‘fiancé’ that left him to drown in the logistics department by himself. Like *****, call that marriage off at the very least!He acknowledged that he didn’t have any feelings towards that school in the previous chapter but then changed his mind when he saw the ‘aura’ of the Fiancé. The aura of a bumbass, stinky ass 3-star teacher working in a sinking ship.Glory my ass. Leave that *****! Her dumb ass knew he was facing trouble but didn’t do anything and then she had the audacity to try to keep him in the school. She didn’t even know that he was good at all! She just didn’t want to give him away! She hadn’t seen him in years and was surprised on how he looked.I’m starting to dislike beautiful women in these types of novels. Like there was no good reason in why he stayed. ‘I want to prove to everyone that I’m not someone who needs a woman’. Like *****, go to another school and dominate that **** and show that you were under pressure or something and that’s why you couldn’t be a grand teacher.Like **** that school. Fuck the Fiancé. And Fuck the grandpa that was the headmaster Of that school. Fuck! Fuck them all!Dumbass female!Fuck! I’m sexist now! LOOK WHAT YOU TURNED ME INTO!
If you want to read a story that slowly builds up tensions, has an actual plot that builds on itself and a powerful world building series that tackles cultivation in a unique way then I would highly recommend this
The mc is a total retard. In the beginning of chapter it's said that auron can drop the item also there is no contract time that said after the duel the guild and his character must instantly be deleted. He can first calm his mine assembly the elite team that got the potion and ask them first then investigate the cold bank acc and etc and make a proof to trap vice guild and detroy her then assembly the upper echelon of the guild, it's unreasonable if in the whole guild he is the only pillar there's must be someone that he can trust and give the equipment to him and give the leadership to another one so that they can't be bribe and keep each other check then delete the character and start new. I don't hate this kind of novel but this mc is total retard ...
I recently got into the, I guess you could call it the reboot, of this legend, LEGO Monkie Kid, and my mum got me into Journey to the West, which I personally found to be a cringeworthy show, though I believe for its time of production was a good show. I went to find the original story and came across this book, which I never would have expected to have 100 chapters! (Though personally, with the story revolving around Heaven and Earth, it would have been more expected to have 360 chapters, to represent heaven reaching all-though I am not disappointed with the amazing amount that 100 is). It is amazing to see the original story, and I would 100% recommend this to anyone interested in Chinese mythology.
I was generous enough to read the first 20 chapters. With most reviews the first 10 should already suffice as to not waste time. Anyway here's what I thought:Story Development (4/5): The author clearly has an overall picture of how he wants the story to pan out. The overall story arc seems interesting enough. This was the only reason I could bear to read so far. However, it could be so much better if the author weaved in background context and world-building to supplement the story arc. It helps the reader understand the pace of the story. World building/Background (2/5): Bland. The author doesn't care to elaborate on the world and we are tunnel-visioned to what the MC is doing. The author makes it hard to visualise the world and the context/connection between everything. The world so far feels like so instance-based. (E.g. MC is at point A then at point B). It makes it hard to judge the passage of time and the flow of the novel too. Also the author makes inconsistencies with details about characters and other stuff. Characters (2/5): Characters so far seem bland and 1 dimensional. MC has no defining features about himself. He is literally a kid with no aspirations who is average in life and has a mundane personality. An epitome of a blank canvas. Everyone else in the story has no defining context. They literally seem like faceless NPCs that are only there to trigger a storyline progression. Arthur is probably the only one in the story with some detailed background. However, this detail was mostly drawn upon from my previous understanding of Arthur in pop culture.Writing Quality (1/5): Bad. So many punctuation and grammatical errors. Numerous spelling mistakes and sometimes the author put the word novice where the MCs name should be (Novis). A lot of the paragraphs are convoluted and redundant and could be much more concise and fluid. The author clearly struggles sometimes in trying to express his vision. Although this may be an ******* novel site, if you are confident enough to have this published/shown on the internet then please EDIT YOUR WORK.
Overall I think it's a good novel, since it's just starting I can only hope for a more stable and wonderful release. It has mad potential though. The other gods and Primordials seem to be the bad guys in my book.
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