The Sky Rangers

This story seems like the best one I've seen in quite awhile. Reincarnation, systems, and detectives. What could possibly be added to make a story like this better? Flawless.

caught up to the raws.. the novel is pretty nice.. unlike fantasy simulator and astral apostle which take lots of chapters in other realm this novel doesn't take that many chapters in each realm.. though most of the chapters are in other realms it doesn't take an unreasonable amount of chapters for each realm where story is mainly in other realm n there's barely anything happening in the real world(currently MC spent a significant amount of chapters in main world)another difference from the 2 novels is that there's no returning unless the entire simulation(traversal) is completed and once the simulation is completed there's nothing like returning to the same realm again(as of now) and millions of years have passed in those realms within a day in main world it seemstraversal isn't the power held only by the MC rather it's like cultivation in a cultivation worldit kinda seems to be a time stop during the traversal as millions of years pass by in the other realm per each day in main world but it's not yet that clear as MC's simulations have been pretty short lived like less than 30 years in other realm(as he had variety of reasons to leave early).. so even if he simulates for like 1000 years it would take a little more than 10 minutes in the real world(taking 1:3 million time ratio)

Another sect building system. The MC is someone who crossed over into a dead end sect with only one member besides himself, a mysterious girl (oh wow didn't see that coming) Please excuse my sarcasm. If you're a veteran wuxia reader like me, this novel doesn't offer anything new at all. The MC gains a system to make his sect stronger, if he doesn't do it in 100 years he dies. MC so far uses the in-system purchases to buy charms that temporarily increase comprehension to give people pointers in public to lure in new disciples. He also used one to temporarily increase his cultivation speed. So far, meh.Read it once, read it a thousand times.This novel offers nothing new, and is only good if you're looking for a wuxia with some overused comedy tropes and clichés. If you enjoy such things, I am impressed.

A solid 2. Great idea. But when you introduced the arena before even began to develop the life merchant story made me sigh. So much waste opportunities of a good story.So many loops holes. A will name a few that bother it me:-> The contract only specify that if he tell someone about him the contract became null. So what happens in that case ? The money magically returns to him and he keeps the gained life years ? The other party forgets about him ? Either case this magical ability will be very alluring to the underground world. If someone force to say who gave them money. You can imagine the consequences.-> Even in a offshore account he can't spend money in his home. He needs to launder money to appeared to be a legitimate gains. If not the government will be suspicious.-> What happens if someone ask for something that he can't do? What happens if he can't fulfill his part of the deal ? No alternatives explored.-> Range of the merchant world ? Somewhat we can deduce that is less than 100 meters while he follows the girls back her home.-> Body-fucking-change-pill and he offered that pill to a girl in a toxic relationship. Not even thinking about trans ? Fame wannabes girls/boys? This people will literally die for that opportunities. Even add a clause that if they reach fame they will deposit a certain percentage of money each month.-> You changed the requisite of omnipotent sight from lvl 2 to 3 from 10.000 to 1.000.000 and somehow the mc completed that in less than a month ? Bs.Sorry. Dropped the novel. Maybe even will write a similar but logical story since I like the premise.

[Congrats you have unlocked the passive skill [Perception] you can now see an enemy's presence behind a wall. Marked by a red orb where their heart is. Only active while sneaking. Cannot be used for finding the undead]

"Stop talking you idiot sit down your not as young as you ones were" the king said getting up of bed and taking a seat that was in the room.

Author, you have my support! Please keep writing!

'I wonder what will happen if I used the skill upon my self, I doubt that it will revel something interesting... what hell !!!'