On one hand, the work wasn't as hard as he thought it would be, granted he wasn't doing even half as much as the other servants. Alex was only expected to clean up around the house. He wasn't preparing meals or anything fancy like that.
I think that, aside some typos and the grammar, that has a few slight issues, the story shows a lot of promise with the vast world building, and the interesting character of Valtar.I'll be following this story as well as I can.Keep up the good work, dude ^^
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