The Shadow Over Blackthorn Hollow

Supporting you.....................................................Keep up the good work.You are doing great for a newbie.But do try to keep it original

Horribly naive and it just smells of wish-fullfillment and not the feel good type... The author probably didn't even read the web novel nor the light novel... it feels that he's knowledge regarding tensei shitara slime datta ken is superficial at best, just took some powers from there and bam! that's it! while I understand that it's fanfiction and the cannon rules are to be loosely followed, this is just *******ish at best, Ancient One "just felt" that mc is good and kind and wouldn't pose a threat... and the name... Lucifer... really? I know how hard it is to come up with original names but really?

I couldn't even get past the first chapter this book is so cliché and poorly developed/written.

Really great novel! I can't wait for it to get picked back, which I hope the author does. Just finished reading it all and loved the direction it was going. I don't want to accidentally put in a spoiler, so I'll leave it at that for this review. I will say that when it does pick back, it seems due for some world building, perhaps alongside the tournament arc competition thing it's entering.

I have to say, I have being enjoying the novel so far. It is funny, with the behavior of the MC being somewhat strange and unique. Sure, there are grammatical errors and some unnecessary repetitions here and there, but the story so far has kept me hooked. Hope things continue to go along nicely.

After one week of struggling and hard working with having my night fun time, finally my kingdom greatly improved and been more functional for living. The third batch of slaves, about five thousand peoples, arrive on this country. The Artos Store done a good job on that. The dark elves refugees also arrived at the same time, which amount about 10 thousand peoples. I located them in the empty apartments in my city after registered as my citizens here. The most surprised things are all of them are females and almost of them still virgin. I don't know why, but they always mate with other races and only give birth to baby girls. But, it's still doesn't answer why most of them a virgin. The main reason is the supetious believe that the dark elves are connected to succubus tribe and bringing bad luck to their partner. One of my slave, Lolothia, is the dark elf, and cute too. Her age is about 300 years old, as she already lost the count. She never brought the bad luck to me. I love her same as others. She actually my second partner in this world after Cuddle. At first, she told me about the ridiculous story, but I as Japanese people (yeah, I don't, but I been living there for long time) don't believe about that. She cried for happiness, after that a little for a pain, and then, a happiness again. She managed to attract the dark elves, well, after she pregnant with my baby. I don't know why, but it's hard to get them pregnant, but I only take a few weeks to make it happens. So all of them want me to... make them a mother, after several centuries, they been hiding from other tribe. My Prime Minister pouting cutely and ask me several times to give her my affection but I want her to train her successor if she became pregnant later. Same as other princesses, they must have their successor become becoming my baby mother. Don't stare at me Shiro, I mean Ilya, you must lead the army force for awhile. And you Cuddle, don't you irritate her with showing the baby bump to Shiro. Why you holding tight my hand, Yuna. I won't let you pregnant yet because you are the most important person in the domestic affairs.

The time is like stopping. Didn't Novi say she would vacation with her family?

This is now my favorite book!!