Ryan is a great young talented writer who won a wattpad watty 2020 awards. Lets hope he can also bring the same magic to webnovel reader trough this novel. good luck
The interactions of the four main characters are truly realistic, it felt like these buddies are your best friends! Yes, I mean it, the dialogues are blending with great execution on what conversations should be, what the talks in real life should be.All of those are thanks to the author's writing quality, as well as the style. Try to spot the grammatical errors, but you can't!Oh, you realized that this novel is powered by science, physics, and stuff? Don't be afraid of that, the way the narratives are written will allow you to understand them without the help of google's assistance.I wonder why the heck those things got stuck in the mid-air. Fantasy strings? Quantum strings? I don't know. Read it to find out!
Really funny. I enjoy the comedy and dark aspects, and I was shocked at the blend. Looking forward to more chaotic character actions and world development.
The only pro is that the MC is OP and has a good base to start from.As for the cons:1> Author tried to put in mystery and failed miserably ( too much of anything just gets annoying and bad ).2> The MC is a Naive snob who doesn't know the value of anything. He has been protected his whole life so doesn't even know slums exist and is waaay too idealistic.3> The only ambition he has is to 'make his father proud' which is quite honestly just downright sad as it seems his entire character has been molded to present him as a good prince.4> People don't want to start a war against his father and yet they discuss war to take control of Julius???????????
Good start, albeit some little mistake here and there, it is totally normal for a new writer! The world building is really interesting and it has a lot of potential! Would totally recommend 😉
This atrocity is an insult to the source material that only stupid or challenged people could enjoy. Do keep that in mind before you start this journey of aneurysms and no grammar.
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