It seems alright, however the synnopsis was confusing, grammar mistakes, the characters don't feel at all real or unique and I don't really get the spark in reading where I expect something from it. A good attempt however and I wish you well in writing.
I love this book, the fiction portrayed is absolutely amazing, I like the way the characters are depicted, I definitely recommend this book, the author has done a great job with this story
its too forced. i mean author is putting words into characters mouth. their personality is bland. MC does not even give basic knowledge about anything. i mean i read up to 7 chapters ,i do not even know the realm sequence .
i like your story and will continue to await all updates and i want to ask if you have any of novels like this one that you would recommend to me so i can read them just send me their names in a message
luv this story, luv what youv've been doing. I look forward to every chapter, it keeps me constantly refreshing the phone everyday to see if a new chapter has dropped yet lol. I would definitely, and highly recommend this gem, to other readers who are fans of a good cultivation story.
"Here, for you! Take this a token of friendship. I made this myself. if you press the small symbol on its chest three times, it will send me a distress signal that you need help. If you pull the left ring finger, it will try to contact me and then we can talk like in our phone. If you pull the right then we can make a video call. Cool right! This is my version showing my scouter." I explained to her slowly so that she can memorize it.
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