The story and world development is excellent. Unfortunately the main character has a main flow that does not at all correspond to the plot. For example he was betrayed by his fiance hence when he reincarnated he is supposed to be deceive and more wary of schemes right? That's natural. However he is still has this ***** way of thinking. He hates killing even against enemies who wants him dead. At first I thought the mentality will change as the story progresses but it doesn't. Women do the killing for him. It is so pathetic. Yet he expects to get revenge on the woman who betrayed him with these kind of thoughts. I feel seriously sad about this novel. It had so much good potential but the character development was so bad. It is such a shame. If you like wishy washy cowardly MC who lets his harem do the crutial parts then this is the novel for you.
authors way of story telling is very blunt. felt no feeling from reading.no explanation about system, world background,power level, skill slots..etc.there is no character development or certain logic why mc doing things.author has alot of ideas but he is not a good story teller.
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