The Search for Immortality

This is one of the best novels i have ever read! Its ok if he posts long as long as you still post i am happy. Please continue working on this novel. This has great potentials.

The first 100 chapters or so are really good, with interesting characters and world design. The plot holes and unrealistic actions of those in this cultivation world gets progressively worse though, the author clearly understands how a cultivator world should be and tries to change it to make everything feel more modern both in the culture and the way everyone reacts. This doesn't work very well, it instead makes the world and the people in it feel shallow and dragged along by random desicion making. The plot and idea behind it is really good though and I was really interested in how it would go throughout the "Tutorial" he was in. But alot of the systems and feature are disregarded or make no sense and destroy the story. My biggest gripes were the loyalty system and how he supposedly rewrites the " yin slaves" memories but that left their personalities cause otherwise they would be boring. WHICH the author correctly writes them as just that, slaves with no control but some personality. Later though the author has some character's completely disregard their loyalty stat and the fact they are yin slaves who aren't supposed to be able to betray or harm their master unless ordered to in extremely obnoxious and plot hole inducing stupity that adds drama and moves the story along by disregarding everything mentioned before in the story.All in all, the author somehow took a good story and characters up to the 70~chapter mark and then started adding plot holes, contradicting himself and making shallow characters that make random decisions that anyone can tell are forced into the story to make the story move in a different direction.

Thank god ISSTH completed before this sh***y war between QI and ww , still i am reading novels from both sites, chinese authors are great creators of imaginative world. If QI going to monopolise all the chinese novels and then putting paypal for reading novels, then i have to stop this amazing journey in chinese novels because i cant afford it. But i hope this doesn't happen.....

I saw this story as a series on TV and decided to download the book cuz the one in the series is not translated.After I downloaded it I saw the book has a very good concept but the arrangement is very bad.Ever since I started reading this book I haven't understood anything cuz the text are all packed together. Thank you.

-Writing Quality-I do not believe you are a native English speaker, you're doing well so far with the writing portion; However, in concern to the quality, I do believe it could use some improvement. Author, you're making grammatical errors even some 2nd graders ( Begging of Elementary School) do not make, even so, these are small mistakes that lead to larger issues. Better to clip them at the source and fix them early on, they're just relatively small mistakes, only there are a bunch of them.-Stability of Updates-It is far too soon to right on this, but from what I surmise, the updates are regularly implemented into the list. This is decent, it is good to  have frequent updates. In comparison, do not "blow your steam

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Not like it😔don’t want to read more…how can be a mother like this

Griff looked down at The Cracker and for the first time his expression changed. He had a solemn expression on his face as black tears fell from his right eye occasionally but now he looked down at The Cracker with a wicked grin.