Where are you Daoist RaLegacy? It was thanks to this forbidden text that I was able to enlighten my spear to peak virility! If only the text had been complete, then my secret move "profound thrusts" would have been one with the Dao... Anyway, Daoist brother I hope you are living well and you are not under the pressure of life's tribulations.I like the story. Still do... #Updatemore
Please, if someone is selling guns, sell them to this author so he can put himself out of his misery, i mean why ****q do you even write with this standard of english? How old are you, dont you have anything better to do than torture people with you lack of imagination, your overflowing **** hormons are screaming lust in every single chapter, go jerk of or something seriously. I seriously wanted to give this book a chance because i try my best to be partial and rational and can even ignore poor english if story is good, but this doesnt even deserve 1/5, its just a plain 0000, go learn english and perhaps finish grade school before you start writting again?
For anyone that reads this know that this is amazing, very good pacing, great character interactions and natural development of relationships.A lot of writing techniques that can be copied, I mean learned from this
Full of action already from the first chapter! There were some minor errors with punctuation and wordings but the built up to the story is nice. I also like how mysterious the FL is, I want to get to know her! keep writing author!
for a 19 year old who transfer to another world the MC behaves like 10 year old who only knows the world is black and white even after he was told to keep his powers a secret on 2 different occasions.
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