First time seeing this novel, I think "Oh.. another garbage novel" But after reading till chapter 31, I know that I was wrong, gravely wrong..Thinking this now, I even feel regret for not read this novel from the first time it appeared. Sigh..Moreeeee... moreee.. I need more, please...
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Hello! I only read up to chapter 5, but I can see the author's hard work.The first chapter is so detailed describing the characters and the situation, but it's a bit of info dump in it. I think some information could be told in the next chapters gradually to give it a more surprising element.The author beautifully described the events in the story. It's so majestic that I really enjoy every description.The dialogues went smoothly. It's not awkward and stiff. That's really good.Each chapter is quite long, but it's not boring. It's interesting and makes me want to read more.The pace is just right. There's a 'seven months later' jumping in the fifth chapter, but it doesn't feel rush. I can still enjoy the development.Overall, this book has a lot of potentials. I hope this book will shine in the future 😍
Just read the first chapter... Giving my support to creators for the efforts and the kindness of sharing the work with us. It's not easy to please everyone so keep the hard work and shine on. Best wishes 😎👍
Miss Linze blushed and looked away. "Just… you know, running into danger excluding us is not a good thing. I appreciate that Mister Zah is sharing his magic so we can fight by his side instead of leaving us behind like useless damsels." (Here Yumina winced.) "It's better to fight to survive and come home."
When my shift ended I ran out of their like my life was depending on it. It seemed that luck was on my side when I got to the cross walk light was green so I ran across. Half way there I heard a loud rumbling and I turned and saw the front of a big truck then everything went black.
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