The S-Class Mage is a Gyaru!?

Reenes POV:

Hence, he wanted to find the shore first, then get out of the sea.

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Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

3. Ridicoulus Human III (Pretty Rare)

Since this is my first review, I'll be frank. First, your quality of writing needs to be improved, because in the dialogues you messed up a few of them. Second, worldbuilding. You need to specify where the empires or countries where they are located. Overall, your story has potential, so keep writing, and I'm also looking for more!