This story was a fun read until Leonel never followed through with his ideas or goals. I waited for him to upgrade his brother's abilities with Black Star until they enterd a realm where it became pointless. I waited for him to revive anyone in the silver tablet until it became to late. I waited for him to use the womb and Gold Fish until his realm was to high for it to matter. I waited for Black Star to grow into a decent character. I waited for Lionel to share dimensional cleanse with Aina or his brothers but he never doas. I waited for Aina to help point out areas where his brothers could focus on to improve but nothing. I waited on him to help his brothers but he just does the bar minimum for them to improve. this Story is just Leonel jumping from crisis to crisis and him thinking he'll help but then he never followes through.
I love the Synopsis of the novel but I have question will there be romance involved in the novel as my preference in the long run I can't just enjoy novel's which don't have romance.
This Book is Great but the update is slow tho but it the author idea anyway so I just going to Wait and when this book hit above chapter 100 I going to come back and speed read it hehee.
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Completely honest reviewI'm not a perfect writer, but I'll try to make the story as understandable as possible (I'm not very good at storytelling either)I will try to give life to everyone in the story, I do not like to see only the generic NPC of a game, I want them to also have a life, not only exist for my main character and the other secondary characters.Combat: I will try to make the combat between each character as detailed and understandable as possible and omit some sections in which the main or secondary character continuously kill the same species of a creature so that this scene does not become repetitive and boring.Detail of the world and the surroundings: I want to describe 100% the whole world of heart of the oasis, giving the reader the best capacity to understand the world in which the main character is currently.Quality of writing: speaking sincerely, I'm not very good at writing and may be able to find some errors in the text or even multiple errors, so I will keep abreast of everything.Speed of publication: I will be as fast as possible in terms of publication from one chapter to another, but I have estimated that it will be 1 chapter per day.Thank you for reading. I leave at your discretion how many stars think that this novel should have.
Ok so, first off I am still on free chapters, so I do not know the rest but from what I can see is that the story is slow but that is it as well as him being a baby, which is not the kind of thing I like (this is my PERSONAL opinion) I also believe that the world is kind of just ‘kill them they are not like us’ and it is repeating for meNow on to the objective part of the review (I will be using no emoptions for this or at least try not to) great character just can’t do much is very sentimental and wants to help people. Quality and updating stability are both consistent. Overall great book and wish I could spend money on it already, but it isn’t summer for me
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