Giving 5 stars just cuz of the villain tag and hopefully Mc is actually evil and not some trash antihero. I've stopped after a few chapters cuz I hate waiting for updates will continue after more chapters are out
Well it's kinda interesting.. nice job!I'll wait for more chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MoremoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMore
Cringe.The author genuinely thinks making fun of readers and breaking fourth walls is funny, but he handles it in a way its cringey and unimmersive. There is no coherent flow, its just scenes stamped against one after another, its kinda like watching a tv cartoons where next episode are not related to the next.Or its like watching Gintama but unlike Gintama this aint funny at all. One of the cringy comedy I could not forget are done this way.Reader: Wait a minute this seems odd.Mc: **breaks the fourth wall and proceeds to say: Hey if you the reader think that way you are wrong cuz [insert reason here]I have short term memory, adding to the fact they are forgettable I wanted to bring something up. I remember some scenes that i wanted to point out but oh well.
I love the story thus far, I wanteded to know the background of the main character, why he was abandoned and a consistent in flow of chapters! The story is captivating keep it up! Who is the My lady and what does she wany
It needs work but I can tell the author is passionate and likes to write. I can appreciate the effort and am willing to respect the dedication to writing something of this length. There’s a lot of room for change and improvement.
Infront of them were standing Twenty Cultivators and in front of them was a man in his thirties, who was sitting on a rock. He was watching at the Hall made in the Middle of the Mountain.
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