The Ruraera

Finally find something worth reading and this is free to read

It seems that he tried to copy the world of the wizard named Leylinfarlier, but failed. The world order is absurd. Knight techniques are used more in a wizard academy, and a first-level apprentice mage cannot defeat someone who is not a knight. In the wizarding world, the mage is the main profession, the rest should have a smooth development course, if not weaker. Whether it's the power dynamic, the meditation method, the break, the adventures, it's very simple and misinterpreted. Failed

The writing quality is actually pretty high in this book, cant say much about world building as it just started but. It seems promising. Now a few tips that i think could help are that, you probably shouldnt add any type of romance. With it not really making sense as the Mc is another species. And dont add a female Paragon as it will just feel forced andruin the story. Also dont make the protagonist a hero or antihero that tries to save the world. Because i feel like its getting over used and wouldnt match the Mc personality. Now he dosent have to be a villain either. He could just be willing to do what it takes for his goal.But overall i like where the story is going.👍🏼

Nice and intriguing. The story has great potential. Kudos Author