The Runic Mage

I hope  you don't make the same mistake of the tryanny  of steel and introduce the guns to fast and focus on cold weapons and infrastructure also it would  be nice to see more kingdom building instead of war and also hope you introduce heram as its fairly  common for powerful men to have them and it died after Christianity  took over and to all the people  who  complain  about the girls falling for the mc easily  in tryanny of steel are stupid first he is the mc second he is handsome third he is rich and powerful  and in old days where daughters wear  wed to just gain some profit and have to say in whatsoever its not hard to imagine why they fell for him being liberal  and all the above reason so they are just stupid I hope you add heram in this also hope this novel also has the mc writing books on philosophy and what  not as he lived in the future and describe  how thing might be in future English is not  my native tongue sorry

I just want to say hello to all the people coming from my other work here on webnovel. I have deleted the 3 other 5 star reviews that this has gotten because I want people to start leaving reviews only after I reach chapter 50. I hope by this time I can get a translator and nobody has to use google translate, this way unbiased reviews about the writing quality can be posted. The story is easy to read and there are very rarely spelling or punctuation errors. If I miss spell a word or need to fix some math, just say the word or math problem in the paragraph comment and I'll fix. No need to write anything other than that. Please don't leave comments about the lore of gods and other deities. I have changed and described them differently in the story than in real life. Don't read if that offends you.Please only leave comments about characters, locations, story development and history of both the real world or Ancients World. I will delete any comments pertaining to 'Logic' or 'Grammar'. The story is very well written and there is little to no reason at all to complain. Hope you all enjoy the story and have a great day!!

Its a good read, the MC is cunning and clever. Every character has their own development. The story is interesting ,I never got bored while reading it.ENJOY!!

Writing quality isn't that great and lots of artificial word count inflation via unnecessary convoluted descriptions and caracter reintroductions at the start of nearly every chapter that sometimes take up as much as 1/4th of the chapter.What also annoyed me a little bit was the use of German names without actually properly researching their meaning. Like poltergeist. The author used it as a name for the telepathy (which is fine by itself) ability and acted like it was obvious what the ability does just from the name. no it wasn't. The defining characteristic of poltergeists is that they never manifest, so they cannot be perceived apart from their activity, not that they throw things around. Direct speech can also be confusing to follow as the author doesn't make it clear who is speaking and just randomly breaks up direct speech into multiple paragraphs even though it's still the same caracter speaking, which makes it seem like it's another caracter talking. I tried to give this book the benefit of the doubt and bought a couple paywalled chapters. The writing didn't get better, and the word padding also didn't stop. It's fine if you don't care about the free chapters as they don't make you any money, but selling people something of this quality for 11 coins per chapter is just straight up insulting your readers.

Waiting for more

"You mean no harm don't you? " I asked

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"Aretha said you are in trouble," I answer bluntly. "We thought that you are in need of help, and – "