The Runaway Maid is Loved by the Archmage

"Trust the cloak," he whispered.

"Am not" I rolled my eyes.

As I open it, A very manly, with tall and handsome features, is standing beside the glass wall looking outside. Tssk he didn't bothered looking at my direction

Name: Ash Ketchum (Richard 19yrs old)

"It was my turn," I say, the words almost inaudible; squashed down by the sound of the car moving against the road.

-When you get out of the egg, well, they all suppose it.

Bertepatan dengan itu pula aku merasakan tubuhku dialiri energi yang tidak dapat kubilang bahwa itu energi yang hebat... Atau lebih tepatnya memuakan.

I fell in love the writers style and I believe this book is going to do just great!

Writing Quality: The overall writing quality is good, but there are some errors and incomplete words that can be spotted. (4 stars)Story Development: The story has a slow pace and is quite boring. In the first 20 chapters, there is no fighting, only talking and romance. It would be better to classify this novel as "slice of life." (3 stars)Character Design: The main character has a likable personality, and I also enjoy his wife's interactions with him. However, some characters feel bland and lack depth. (4 stars)World Background: The author doesn't provide enough details about the world. The descriptions are limited to generic terms like "cave" and "(Mc Name) House," making it difficult to fully imagine the setting. (3 stars)Updating Stability: The author wrote a chapter mentioning that the novel is free, which shows dedication and hard work. This deserves a 5-star rating. (5 stars)Evaluation: The story is decent, but it becomes boring due to the lack of action. It feels more like a slice-of-life romance than an engaging plot. However, I won't drop the novel because of this. Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes writing this review, so please don't remove it, even if it doesn't align with your preferences. I enjoy your other novel, particularly "Stealing the Protagonist's Yandere Lovers." Keep up the good work, and I hope you continue writing it.

signing a contract so soon is a bad thing author ngl cause most of us don't pay to read you should've had made a patron till 200-300 chapters and then signed it cause no way many gonna buy the series to read 20 chapters hope you understand the mistake btw haven't read it but hope you make it🤞

I just started this book and I'd like to beg you author...please don't screw this up, with those kinds of abilities, the MC should be a cold and cunning villian,or someone who priorities power over relations..he can have relationships but it shouldn't limit him...anything less will just be a wasted ability on him

You can literally understand the role of every character.keep it up🔥