The Ruler Of Darkness

The story starts promising but with an extremely bad pace, 80 ch. for only two days and then a week in 10 ch. making an inconsistency in pacing. Also the mc in the zanza development arc is contrary to the first arc, just wanting to change everything to modern standards forgetting he is in older times and as he already explained first he has to adapt, but this doesn't happen. Also the interest for him creating a competitive market of modern times is ridiculous, considering he has a monopoly of goods that are groundbreaking, thus he don't need that competitive prices.In general the story is good with interesting concepts such as the army scheme and world building but the mc cannot manage to get a defined personality: does he want to conquer, develop economy, protect himself or let debauchery consume him, is he a good person, is he bad, neutral. It isn't clear what he wants or what he is so the mc becomes a character with inconsistencies that damage the plot and development of secondary characters.

This seemed like it had so much potential at the beginning, and I was so excited to read it. I wanted to see what fun things the wolf would do and people he'd meet. This unfortunately turned out to be pretty cliche and boring. The mc is dumb and let's himself get pulled along by a girl with charm. He doesn't seem to have any goal in mind or any plausible reasons for what he does. The author repeats things like "sad background bc I'm an orphan" instead of going into it. Ultimately the characters are just badly written to me bc they seem so robotic and boring. Very disappointed.

I was quite envious of your English and writing style. the way you described things is very good. I don't know much about love story, but Jake and Abby was quite intriguing. You can feel the sadness and love of Jake towards Abby.

<p>After Bei Chendong withdrew from 'Hidden Expert', the production crew had no choice but to stop filming.</p>

"Morgan!" Ophelia called, rushing over to the prone figure along with the silent Ethan. Whatever bond they held with the man evidently overcoming their fear.

let me tell you a story about how I was reborn from earth to a world of cultivation, and my journey to reach the top.

- você não vai fugir do grande erro que você cometeu - E ela estende a mão para mim então eu seguro a mão dela e levanto mas logo em seguida Com muita "calma" eu começo a falar

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