Pretty meh. It was cool at first, but it became long winded. The first bank robbery scene lasts basically 15 chapters or so. Way too long imo. I got bored when nothing was happening. They just kept exaggerating how ferocious he looked or whatever. Boring
well it's a good novel and you should give it a read whatever problems you had in the beginning will be solved in the later stages his character is developing and I can say that author is one of the best authors on the Web Novel.oh and by the way our MC is a Villain (more like a AntiHero) but still don't come here and expect a goodey goodey two shoes who does everything for the benefit of people no he is not like that and that is the charm of him
The writer is very talented , the storyline is unique different from others have come across in a way. I love the suspense but it shouldn't be too much and I'm waiting and looking forward to the next parts
Just caught up to the latest chapter.Can't wait for more.Writing Quality: Some grammar stuff. You can understand what is being said. Nothing too jarring, just needs a couple of passes for refinement/tidying up.Updates: Just caught up, so don't know the schedule. But the author seems to keep the readers in the know with Author's notes.Story Development: Standard gaming stuff. New game comes out, MC and friends start playing, dungeons/quests, meet new friends, repeat, etc. Mostly in-game progress, not much IRL progress except for mandatory logouts/rests.Characters: MC seems good. Has some quirks that his friends understand/playfully use against him. He has a history that I would like to know more of.Roommates need more fleshing out. But that maybe due to the MC not wanting to pry into his friends' personal lives.New set of guildmates have been introduces, will see how they mesh with everyone else.World Background: Standard VRMMORPG. Hyper-Intelligent Learning AI. NPCs that look/act real. Different areas/severs for every nation.
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