From synopsis-The god of light want to summon mc for the sake saving the world from churning abbys, why? Maybe he failed to protect firuman world so he summon mc(mortal?)? Or juat being lazy as$?? -The answer is god of light must know our MC have godly cheat that have properties Defying destiny the so called PLOT ARMOR!!!
I have really enjoyed reading this book. I hope you will resume updating the story soon. As for the editing, make things easy on yourself and partner with a volunteer or hired editor. Even professional writers use another set of eyes to catch their errors and make constructive suggestions for the flow of the story.This is an excellent work. Please continue developing the story, characters and plot. And, don’t forget to come back with new chapters!😎👍
This is your typical cookie cutter apocalypse story where everyone behaves like retards. All enemies are arrogant and pick fights in a world where literally anyone can kill you through skills or guns. I mean, seriously, I’m suppose to believe an enemy would think a bus that drove hundreds of miles across zombie infested land is an easy target? And if everyone carries guns, how long would you live acting snobby and pissing people off? Even if you have an army backing you, the guy in front of you could still take you down with him.Everything is so forced. It’s just an endless parade of retarded enemies bad mouthing the main character and getting crushed. Don’t read this if you want anything remotely close to rational behavior.
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