It looks promising, pacing can be increase more but I personally like slow story building, keeps us link to characters more. I am looking forward to reading more about Ravian story, I am more interested in him than the MC 😅
I know it’s a bit early, but I couldn’t resist writing a review of my own story! I’ve only completed a few chapters so far, but I’m excited about the direction it’s heading. My motivation is to create a story that’s rich in character development and depth, especially with the protagonist. I’m taking my time to explore his complexities, desires, and conflicts so that I can shape him into a truly unique and captivating main character. My goal is to craft a novel that not only entertains but leaves a lasting impact. I hope to create a world and a story that readers can get lost in, with twists and turns that keep them hooked till the very end!
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I know it’s a bit early, but I couldn’t resist writing a review of my own story! I’ve only completed a few chapters so far, but I’m excited about the direction it’s heading. My motivation is to create a story that’s rich in character development and depth, especially with the protagonist. I’m taking my time to explore his complexities, desires, and conflicts so that I can shape him into a truly unique and captivating main character. My goal is to craft a novel that not only entertains but leaves a lasting impact. I hope to create a world and a story that readers can get lost in, with twists and turns that keep them hooked till the very end!
Found it interesting but could you
Please increase the pace
Overall it’s really good and I enjoyed it
Waiting for another one 😊