So I went into this story thinking it'd be like all of the other new books and wouldn't be worth reading past the first few chapters, but to my surprise I found myself getting hooked into reading this.So my reasoning for my score is:Translation Quality 4/5Everything seems good so far but these could be translations that days were spent on and when the new chapters hopefully get released we could see a quality drop.Stability of Updates 1/5Yes we got 60 chapters at once but if this story gets picked up I have no idea if we're looking at a once a day or a few times a week in regards to updates, I'll come back and update this if it gets picked up.Story Development 3/5The story seems to be a bit disjointed in terms of tone and the story seems to be rushing from one place to another, hopefully new chapters will improve these things.Character Design 4/5I like the characters in this story quite a bit but many of them are stereotypical and don't seem to be acting like normal people would in certain scenarios so hopefully this will improve.World Background 3/5The World background we see seems to be good but there isn't much outside of those small snippets that we know about the world at this point in time.
A Shameless 5 Star Review From the Author.Heads up to all of you!This is my first novel joined in a contest.Please support my other book if you liked this one!Things to Remember1. Grammar and I are still not that close, please bear with us!2. Don't kill me if you hated how I gave a very odd cheat to the MC.3. The story plot is chaotic! I apologize in advance.4. I need a plumbing paste for the plot holes that might appear in between chaps.5. Futuristic setting has different views depending on Author's perspective, if you want to see people using laser guns, this is not the right place!6. Characters will be as crazy as the author! How crazy can they get? Even I don't know?7. If you have something to tell about the story like how dope the MC is, feel free to comment! I'll try to respond to everyone.8. Last but not the least! Enjoy the story and have fun!9. Lastest but not the leastest! Please support the story! The author is pleading you to do it! If you support the story, may Urie's prowess affect all the games you're playing!That's all!
Hello this is Brandon Gould i am the writer of Tylingariea Epic I am responding to a review swap that I sent you here is my reviewOf the chapters i enjoyed the book and even being written on a broken phone you able to write 11 chapters of a book. If there were plotholes i was not able to find any as for the world and the premise it had a little bit in common with SAO { sword art online} or The Rising of Shield Hero that is not a bad thing it is just something i observed. I will keep up with this story to see what will happens
"You can't talk Daisuke down," Naruto rebutted. "He's too stubborn. He twists himself into knots trying to justify whatever crazy position he's taken and the only way he'll change is if he gets it beaten into him that this is the way things are and trying to change it would send us back to the Warring States period!"
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