It's an acceptable story from a quality point of view.It's a very funny story. You can see how this will make the fights more tense when the odds are against the heroes and death in a substantial but not fatal match.Now concentrate on the best elements. Characters. Many characters!
It starts off good, but as the story progresses it becomes a *** fantasy rather than kingdom building and politics it was supposed to be. Like there are more than 3 chaps in a row, dedicated entirely to ***, but having more than one chapter simply to give more description of the MC-s territory seems to be too much of a task. It gives that Japanese virgin eroge novel/manga vibes that I don't like at all.
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