The Queen and the Lion

I like the beginning so much, love the brothers

First of all theres a lot of issues but theres a lot of pros as well, its more rather a mindset story that changes whetever its good or bad from the reader reading.

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Definitely a diamond hidden in the rough. Other than a couple spelling based errors near the start of the story this novel is really quite underrated. Hard working and relatable MC who develops as a character at reasonable pace. The author gives real reasons for how the MC can become OP without it being over the top. Sorry to see the story on hiatus, I think it has real potential. Thanks for writing it!

For short story, this story is quite entertaining. I like the development and the ending is good for all individuals.But overal, i like the story. Please keep writing. Thanks 😊🙏🏻

Very good and descriptive! I love the way you started the novel with “A meaningless war” or smth like that. Also, your word-building is nice, I like it a lot! The plot already is intriguing and the book itself from the first phrase. Keep up the good work!

Don't mind what others are going to say bro, keep up the good work 🤫