The Queen and Her Pawn

Okay let me change the condition.

Author, your novel has great potential. It has good world background, story,plot, etc.But your writing style has problem. Every chapter you write recently(last 50 chapter)all has unnecessary word filled the 80% of story it's feel like reading a text book not feel like a novel.In a novel there should be character to character conversation not a third person describe like telling us children story.so, author I suggests yo to change your Writing style

Currently about 60 chapters in and I'm loving it! Each main character has a detailed back story that helps you fall in love with them. I'm happy I finally found a series that has so many chapters already published ❤️😅

Hey there! If you're in the mood for something a little different, you're in the right place. This story has it all – action, mystery, and some seriously unexpected twists. From the red comet to the twins with strange powers, there’s so much to discover. And don’t worry, I promise you won’t be bored! Whether you’re here for the wild battles, the character journeys, or just to see what happens next, I think you’ll have a blast. So why not give it a try? I won’t let you down, I swear!

oh my God! what an amazing novel like seriously this one just made it into my top three of all time,   I don't have anything to complain about I really enjoy OP characters so keep it rocking my friend and give me more more more. I can't wait keep up the hard work my friend God bless you.