Its a novel with a great start but after chapter 80 the author is off the main story rails and tons of fillers and rubbish characters overshadow the mc and main plot. It may make the story full of depth but unneccessary plotholes is just showing the author is running out of steam and shooting airplanes randomly.
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I would like to start by saying the story is great and what I mean by giving it such a low score on writing quality is not to criticize the author but rather the translator because this iS machine-translation quality with minimal editing, which is unfortunate as I would love to read more; however with such low quality translations, it is headache inducing to read.
Hold up....I could have sworn I read another trial novel with the exact same plot and system... whats going on here?????Are they just copy pasting novels now?
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the novel is worth a try its pretty good.the character is naive but reasonable because of his last life,the lack of interaction,experience, and being isolated in community makes a good reason for lacking in common sense,it will be great in future character development.but the skills and system is to op,you should tone it down. Make your character grow smarter his decision making should sound reasonable,his planning in solving problems,and you should include his future plans for his grow in power ,dont make him a retard in later chapters its a big no no.and the kings garden you should develop it make it a fortress like asgard make a kingdom building genre. so far it is good,good luck on your novel
the synopsis is good. this is great story with potential....it's filled with thrills and very creepy, like an intense moments in an horror story. great work! I am rooting for you. 👍
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