I really enjoyed reading this, I also think that you should keep writing because I want to know what Henry does to Nathan and what will happen to Caitlyn in the story. You're a great writer with a great imagination
Personally I like the story so far although I need more chapters to judge I think you need to describe at least the appearance mc and supportive characters keep up the good work
Just because there are three stars now doesn't mean it isn't a good story. There aren't really enough chapters out to rate it any higher. From the few that are out I can tell that we are finally going to get an MC that is truly dark and slightly psychotic.
Expect torture and the MC twisting the minds of others. Psychopaths do things typically because it brings them pleasure or perhaps they are merely curious? Their lack of remorse, superficial charm and manipulativeness make them absolutely terrifying. I sincerely hope this MC lives up to it.
It was an OK novel and I wish you would post more, but sadly I think you have given up on this novel! Good by author! I need a bit more. A little more.
ATTENTION: Chapter 39 was uploaded twice. I'm sorry about this, just noticed it. I contacted an editor to remove the duplicate chapter. To avoid unlocking the same content, kindly check the chapter title. If you already read Chapter 39, don't proceed yet unless the next chapter states Chapter 40.
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Expect torture and the MC twisting the minds of others. Psychopaths do things typically because it brings them pleasure or perhaps they are merely curious? Their lack of remorse, superficial charm and manipulativeness make them absolutely terrifying. I sincerely hope this MC lives up to it.
Rating will be updated as story progresses.