The Probability of Becoming a Couple with Your Beloved

There : 3 power stones ! I hope to see more chapters, keep up the good work ! :D

"Hey, Chief. You alive?"

After the meal, the centaur, apparently named Chiron, told us"Today we have capture the flag, you know the rules. No maiming, prisoners may be bound but not gagged, and no killing. So go prepare, we start in an hour."

Never! Never!               Never!

"But don't you worry about those toy, i not gonna use it for you but ...." His face come closely to me and he whispered, "Something better, let's we just start the party."

Ugh fix your chapters, Amelia is a she not a he. the idea of the story is good, but your English is killing the book. proof read it man!

No explica nada está novela y lo único que veo es al mc quejándose del miedo tampoco explica quien es la mujer que lo apoya es una mierda de novela no la recomiendo

Eu dou 5 estrelas porque fui eu que criei o livro e posso dizer o quanto trabalhei e dei tudo de mim para criar uma novel que ninguém nunca criou e posso dizer que ela será uma das melhores novel que existe.