The Primeval Herald: The Endless Legacy

"Feesh"

And all that glitters is gold

Cute story so far, looking forward to it. Hopefully more updates soonHavent seen a concept like this before lol. More world building is needed I think

This book has a good concept. the book is well written and has very few mistakes in the chapters.But.the writer of this book is missing some key points.1. The MC is wat to whiny and timid throughout most of the book, and only man's up when he's being shot at.2. the system issues rewards for completing missions, but the writer never goes back and explains them, and the main character doesn't use them and seems to forget about them.3. The whole Lord of the Rings arc is bordering on plagiarism. I feel this concept has great potential. more creativity and imagination are needed for this type of concept.