The Person I Loved Asked Me to Die in My Younger Sister’s Place

Honestly, no offense author but your mc sounds like grandma.

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A GOOD START. I really liked how they made decontamination chambers before you enter or exit anyplace. The sci-fi world setting is also very good. but you need to make it a bit evolved in future coz there are a lot of scientists. The character design is also very good. The stroy is interesting but too early to write a detailed review so I look forward to your growth.

thank you for sharing! I love this translation the most! can't wait to read the rest!

Although Yin Shi Feng knew this was another one of those so called sales pitches and unlikely to be true, he stilled co-operated. " Really?" he asked, leaning in to observe the jade product more attentively.

''Young master.'' The guard slightly bowed, seeing him come out.

"Of course, he is my meal. How could I leave such beauty alone?" Zhen Xiu questioned Shen Ya as if she has lost her mind.

"Now this one is unusual! I paired a part of a buff called [Extreme Senses] with Hex Magic. I only used the "Enhance sense of touch" part of that buff and I've also used the "x2 pain" effect from "Masochistic Defense". He is probably feeling so much pain that it might break his mind now~! Well, for the last but not the least,  Fourth magic, [Tumor]!"