those lines about the protagonist being a smart pansy and the rest of others are dumb as a log just to highlight him is really hard to read,it is too extreme and to be honest cringe.When he himself doesn't act that smart or matureThe narrative is not that good with a lot of unnecessary immature cursing at random things.But the plot is nice and I liked most of the support character
After reading 130+ chapters (thanks for the raws) here's what I can say.In my opinion, people are exaggerating about the patriotism in the novel. MC cares about his family+girl above everything, but also wants to help his country whenever possible. Why? He literally lived through the destruction and massacre of his country's population. It would be rare if that didn't affect him. In fact, I could even say he is selfish. He doesn't help others out of patriotism, he does it because he wants to form his own team to fight demons. He's trying to save the world on his own terms. With that out of the way, it is very readable. MC is definitely OP since he has obtained multiple rewards that although separately are good, combined in the same person make him progress very quickly. However, this is somewhat balanced with the fact that demons are way stronger than humans. As a result, he keeps having to fight enemies quite above his level. Anyways, I suggest you don't let comments about racism/nationalism dissuade you, it's not as bad as some are making out to be.
I must admit that these an original story well conceived but I'm sorry to say that you make a story based on a single goal saving her mother from a so-called disease of which nothing is known and whether humanity can actually cure her or not these due to the lack of relevant information at first instead of focusing on the essentials. What saddens me the most these why you want to make a one-piece style story that never ends because no matter the one-piece type story all The endings will look sloppy because of all the plotholes its would have been better to make his mother a goal for 1 arc and then change for another but not the the objective is to find an object that is supposed to fulfill the wishes, these the dumbest thing to do especially in order to save someone sick after all you want to tell me that he will find it after only some month of research while the others one searches for a long time how his mother will live until then.To finish this story could have been serious if the objective had not been so childish I know that you supposedly want to show us the determination of the MC to save his mother but the "quest for the one piece" turn it into a stupid joke from my point of view
"no way bro, you can see the boss drops"'yeah man I can see them that one is the sword of time, that one is the chest piece of rangiku, and that one is someone's bathwat- uhh no its actually my drink for tonight'"how bro, when ever I kill them i just get a bunch of air.... This is soo unfair how dare the heavens forsake me like this"
nth day he rested from all his work.3Then God blessed the seventh day and made it holy, because on it he rested from all the work of creating that he had done.Adam and Eve4This is the account of the heavens and the earth when they were created, when the LORD God made the earth and the heavens.5Now no shrub had yet appeared on the earthand no plant had yet sprung up, for the LORD God had not sent rain on the earth and there was no one to work the ground,6but streamscame up from the earth and watered the whole surface of the ground.7Then the LORD God formed a manfrom the dust of the ground and breathed into his nostrils the breath of life, and the man became a living being.8Now the LORD God had planted a garden in the east, in Eden; and there he put the man he had formed.9The LORD God made all kinds of trees grow out of the ground—trees that were pleasing to the eye and good for food. In the middle of the garden were the tree of life and the tree of the knowledge of good and evil.10A river watering the garden flowed from Eden; from there it was separated into four headwaters.11The name of the first is the Pishon; it winds through the entire land of Havilah, where there is gold.12(The gold of that land is good; aromatic resinand onyx are also there.)13The name of the second river is the Gihon; it winds through the entire land of Cush.14The name of the third river is the Tigris; it runs along the east side of Ashur. And the fourth river is the Euphrates.15The LORD God took the man and put him in the Garden of Eden to work it and take care of it.16And the LORD God commanded the man, “You are free to eat from any tree in the garden;17but you must not eat from the tree of the knowledge of good and evil, for when you eat from it you will certainly die.”18The LORD God said, “It is not good for the man to be alone. I will make a helper suitable for him.”19Now the LORD God had formed out of the ground all the wild animals and all the birds in the sky. He brought them to the man to see what he would name them; and whatever the man called each living creature, that was its name.20So the man gave names to all the livestock, the birds in the sky and all the wild animals. But for Adamno suitable helper was found.21So the LORD God caused the man to fall into a deep sleep; and while he was sleeping, he took one of the man’s ribsand then closed up the place with flesh.22Then the LORD God made a woman from the ribhe had taken out of the man, and he brought her to the man.23The man said, “This is now bone of my bones and flesh of my flesh; she shall be called ‘woman,’ for she was taken out of man.”24That is why a man leaves his father and mother and is united to his wife, and they become one flesh.25Adam and his wife were both naked, and they felt no shame.the third month, which is the month of Sivan, on the twenty-third day. And an edict was written, according to all that Mordecai commanded concerning the Jews, tothe satraps and the governors and the officials of the provincesfrom India to Ethiopia,127 provinces,to each province in its own script and to each people in its own language, and also to the Jews in their script and their language.Alussa Jumala loi taivaan ja maan.2Maa oli autio ja tyhjä, pimeys peitti syvyydet, ja Jumalan henki liikkui vetten yllä.3Jumala sanoi: »Tulkoon valo!» Ja valo tuli.4Jumala näki, että valo oli hyvä. Jumala erotti valon pimeydestä,5ja hän nimitti valon päiväksi, ja pimeyden hän nimitti yöksi. Tuli ilta ja tuli aamu, näin meni ensimmäinen päivä.6Jumala sanoi: »Tulkoon kaartuva kansi vesien väliin, erottamaan vedet toisistaan.»7Jumala teki kannen ja erotti toiset vedet sen alapuolelle ja toiset sen yläpuolelle. Niin tapahtui,8ja Jumala nimitti kannen taivaaksi. Tuli ilta ja tuli aamu, näin meni toinen päivä.9Jumala sanoi: »Kokoontukoot taivaankannen alapuolella olevat vedet yhteen paikkaan, niin että
Diamond, Diamond, Diamond. What a beautiful and kindhearted character. I love how the author depict and gave us with a fl that ain't weak, naive and above all gave us one that knows what she wants and at least go for it.Tired of fl who doesnt know what they want so love this one.Waiting for more updates and will keep on supporting.
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