i tried reading but could not get past the first 10 chapters. Story itself is good, but bad English ruins experience. I could barely get into the story, every other paragraph, i had to re-read a sentence and correct it in my mind to make sense of it. Tenses are all over the places, sentence structures feel unnatural and painful to read.
Okay, this is one of the first novel after not using WN for 3 and a half month(s)First of all, its a xianxia/video games type of novel where you can somehow brought your combat technique(s) in real life in to the game (just like RoTSSG)MC is abandon(ed ?) kid that got kidnapped and was trained into a killing machine.He somehow lost his memories (presumably because of trauma or just wont acknowledge the incident)He got adopted by the captain who raided the camp where he was trained (just like many other novel that i wont mention)Have a massive talent at both Martial arts and Psychological/Mental arts (because his real parents is "coincidentally" a hero).MC is an opportunistic guy, to say the least.And the DotA references is immeasurable.The world background is impeccable, where you literally got confused because you have to keep remembering that this was a video games novel but still have like 30-40% real world exploration unlike RotSSG where they only explore the video game world.Rate : 4/4/4/4/5
This story is a bit childish. Like, the reading level is a bit lower than normal. There's not enough "showing" and too much "telling". I don't get the feeling that this story is going to be particularly great. There are definitely better options out there. The MC isn't that great either.
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How is the girl gonna give him the bracelet. Will they meet again? I'm so interested in next cheap. When is the next chap be released. Did she started liking him
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