Interesting story truly and then the updates are just something I wouldn't wait for because once I get back from work it is always present. The characters...Gosh, so relatable and lovely(wouldn't want to add to any spoilers hehe)
but there's only some grammatical errors. i think fixing it would be the best.
I hate to stop reading upto chapter 2, although I find the story interesting and the plot was piquing, but the lack of proper quotations and the space in between words were giving me a hard time to read thoroughly. Polishing needs to be done, dear author. I like the setting though, of course, it's the Philippines. My country.
I can’t wait until Dorothy is exposed! Please don’t drag out the abuse any longer, it’s too much to bare reading about Olivia constantly being abused and John being stupidly blind
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but there's only some grammatical errors. i think fixing it would be the best.
I hate to stop reading upto chapter 2, although I find the story interesting and the plot was piquing, but the lack of proper quotations and the space in between words were giving me a hard time to read thoroughly. Polishing needs to be done, dear author. I like the setting though, of course, it's the Philippines. My country.