The One Star Review That *Nearly* Ended The World

It tries to be funny but failed miserably.

Tried it out after seeing it high in the voting poll. Got to ch61 and found absolutely nothing that makes me interested to use fast passes or coins. It’s so frustrating and degenerative. I hate the simplicity and it’s generic characters that seem like it came off another novel of the same cliches and tropes. Thing is, I didn’t mind the cliches, but WHEN they’re EXECUTED this horribly, I have decided this isn’t worth wasting a single amount of time on. Whoever enjoys reading this needs to read better novels; like ISSTH or CD. A waste of time that shouldn’t have been voted with power stones. Just read the eastern fantasies from the trial read books.

I will say this story is good.I definitely suggest new reader to read it.it is one of the best video game novel out there(among recently released video game novel)old readers will enjoy it tooI hope it get picked.. not those which garbage Novel like before.

This is a good novel with good Plot Execution.The MC is Very aware with surrounding and a bit smart.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍(this is not a spam)

I LOVE this book.  Especially the god of luck in all their forms.Dragons, immersive VR, complex world building both in the VR world of the story and the mundane world of the story.  I found it hard to not devour this book on a single sitting!  I recomend reading it slowly to really enjoy the characters and world similar to fine wine or excellently decadent chocolates.

it's really good for a novice writer, probably better then any of the stories i've had to write for school. keep working hard and one day you might be able to get 1mil views! although work on explaining the world and just up the writing styles quality a little bit more! BTW i love the first person

An excellent novel. The Author is an exceptional writer, and this story is a piece of art. The story starts off with character building and a suspenseful plot. The beautiful narrative continues on and builds a fascinating world. The most wonderful aspect of the story is that there is always something new with rich descriptions and vivid imagery. There is a sad undertone to the story, but it definitely helps in highlighting the happy occasions making them more real and easy to connect to. Grammar wise it is almost perfect and possibly one of the best works in WN. I think the most wonderful aspect of this novel is the character building. The MC is just wonderful; he is described very well and the backstories bring life to him making him seem very real. Not only is the MC well described, but so are the side characters. The dialogue between the characters flow smoothly and really highlight their personalities. Reading the story will make you feel that you have been introduced to a diverse cast of characters. Overall, it is a wonderful read and a definite recommendation, the authors, including me, can definitely learn from the meticulous writing and the readers can have a wonderful experience reading this piece of work. Recommendations - for the auxiliary chapter in clarification and explanation, I think you should add "(possible spoilers)" to the title as some extra information is revealed there. My personal opinion is not to leave the great side chapters in the auxiliary section but to add them to the story and just title them side chapter/ side stories.And, of course, it is added to my library to finish reading!

I love this book I know it's available for free but the mtl is horrible plz continue to translate to 1800+ chapters....