The Omnific Lord

              The third type of genius cultivator are people who are sure to reach the divine kingdom and who have a small 30 percent chance of reaching the Emperor's Kingdom. This kind of genius has not existed since the founders of the sects died hundreds of years ago.

"Patriach be careful!" A Chu deacon exclaimed, they are the poisonous smoke, will fall into the present appearance.

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

"Huh?" she was frozen by that grin and felt like she was about to be absorbed into that dark black eyes of his. She shook her head to put an end to her ridiculous thoughts and turned on the radio.

"Itachi, can I check on your eyes? They were bleeding earlier and I would be unable to rest unless I know you are in good health" Chopper says which makes Itachi smile and activate his Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan

Not bad but one main huge problem in my opinion. I think that the stupid trope of mc being some insightful god that intuitively understands the game is bad, but even moreso when the actions the mc takes are completely average. the idea that no one would get the hint that NPCs would teach the players is absurd, and the notion that people only play in a single way and the mc is so special for playing in a slightly different way is infuriating. authors need to stop lowering the average IQ to make the mc look like a genius.

Hmmm...Based on the first chapter alone:Apocalypse, reborn, and FL with a portable space that can store things and grow food—very similar to the apocalypse novel written by ColorfulAutumnWind.

Man, talk about a let down. This is dumb. The author is decided to add in weird plot devices for no reason. To, I assume, justice random acts of assault. Like affects that give you uncontrollable desires at random times. WHICH is different from similar things that have appear already in this story. As there is is a difference between something you can control once you know of it and random ‘uncontrollable’ affects. I mean the author controls it. I don’t know if I would recommend this story.

I think it's good but with the good comes the bad, the MCs first subordinate, her name changes every few paragraphs If it didn't do that and the author was consistent with the names then it'd be great But it's so annoying to see the leader of the place (MCs first subordinate) have her name change from Rachel to Quinn to Sarah to others and back

Love the book, but I have a potentially suggestion for the ending (don’t worry about it if you have plans). Maybe he grows on power, and the book ends off with him entering the main reality, but immediately cuts off the moment he enters as the author (people like you) can’t actually affect the humans of Earth. Idk, thought it would be cool. (And if he does, making him bring the girls too). Either way, thanks for your time