The Officer's Slut (boyxboy) || #Watty's2019

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My favorite and best novel I read : I Shall Seal The Heavens is the reason why I started read more wuxia and xianxia novel. so if you wondering is this novel worth to read then the answer is YES. Thank you very much for DeathBlade for finishing translated this book and er gen who created this novel. and dont forget Meng Hao, the shameless MC, who bring the uniqueness of this book. ** : I think the publisher should be wuxiaworld right ? why this book released here ?

This looks like another incredible work, I know how much hardwork you put in this. I will be enjoying this novel for the time being...Anyways, goodluck author! I'll support you!

It is original at least to me. It is mysterious and makes you wonder who the character is his past and what his future holds. The story is just beginning so can’t say much else but it has potential hope author keeps writing it and doesn’t stop.

I have decided to write my second review after having 63 chapters so far and I want to let you know a few things. One, this is my first novel so it's not a surprised for you to see so many flaws in it. Two, I never written a novel chapter format before but I have learned as I continue to write more. Now let's go to the pros and cons of this novel.ProsStability in update of course is great and the storyline is unique in it's own way as the protagonist does not "follow the book" rules.It has some comedies and light-heart moment in a serious situation. The MC may seem like a simp but he's not because he has no lover like many  male out there. Therefore, it's hard to know how to act around a female considering his inexperience.Not much pros as this novel is just the beginning of me writing in an impulse.ConsLet's say the grammars and tense could really make the story a bit confusing but smart readers should understand my meaning. Of course, if you found some wrong use of tense, do let me know so I can fix it and not look like a fool.The POV aka point of view does changes multiple time through out the novel but as I'm writing this review now. I have fully decided to get rid of the first POV to third POV as it's easier and gives me a wider range in story telling.The fight scene are not that great given I don't specialize nor have experience in how to portray one. But I will try my best to improve it and please be lenient for once.Overall, I didn't rate myself highly since most of the category is either a 3 star or 4star except for my stability of updates. I just hope you will give me a chance as a new writer in here.Thank you for reading my really long review. (However, a review should be this long to begin with xD)

THANKS AUTHOR FOR THIS GREAT NOVEL ......... well that's it and i love this novel by~~

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good hook and interesting enough plot to keep you wanting for more. biggest gripe i have with the novel is the characters. the way they speak is unnatural, written like an ai wrote their dialogue, even their internal monologue sounds stiff and unnatural. another thing is their intelligence, the side characters feel like their a level dumber than the mc and they dont really act their age, things just happen and they just accept it. no questions asked.