I'm also wary about reaching full circle in the near future - Brendan starting to lie (out of embarrassment), therefore Deirdre distrusting him all over again, blah blah blah... the usual boring shit.
"hidden evolutian" yet in the end only using already eksisting templete. bird go to phoenix. lizard, fish and snake go to dragon. fyi "dragon likes snake" not "snake likes dragon
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I like this story, even though it is just a short story this one got some chances to become a novel, but sometimes you have to respect the author's decision to make this creation a short story. My favorite character is Alex Rodriguez and even though I am not a Hispanic, I think his development started to become something great but I think he will one day snap and start to murder everybody to gain success. Also, the guy named Minoru is a big piece of shit!
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