The Night I Teleported Into Her Bedroom - Yuri ( GL story)

Not going to waste a whole lot of time in this. Zi is not treated unfairly. Her character is stupid, lazy, greedy, and dishonest. She's been that from the absolute beginning of the story, since she stupidly tried to control a storm when she barely had any cultivation. You're right, this story is built on Zi, her stupidity at the very least, but that doesn't make her a likeable nor enjoyable character. Also at this point (post herd of snow lions encounter with Duan Yuan) her death wouldn't effect the story that much, East Ocean needs Yujia's Elixir Pills too much and they only get to keep those if they keep Ren. Yes the "romance" portion would go away, but frankly that's been ridiculous and poorly executed from the beginning. Yujia isn't even unrealistic, I know a bunch of women just like her. Kind, patient, caring, smart, good housekeepers, all that and a bag of chips. Zi, unfortunately, also isn't unrealistic, only everyone's continued tolerance of her biTchiNess is. Someone would have put her in her place, if only verbally long before now.So, yes, her stupidity and aSSholery were necessary for the book, that doesn't mean it's unfair to hate her. She's been unlikable from the beginning, her own parents described her as unlikable, her purpose in the book is too be hated because she's a BiTch and provided a necessary conflict. That doesn't mean it's wrong to hate her, people hate villains all the time and they provide the same. All the other villains have been transient, Zi is the toxic viper in their midst that no one seems to be willing to cut the head off of so she just keeps poisoning her environment.Her death would provide a central conflict, eliminate the subpar romantic subplot, and even give Ren a reason to train harder, revenge. It wouldn't even be all that hard to keep Ren blameless since she's constantly running off by herself.TL; DR You're wrong on most counts for several fairly obvious reasons.

"Alright then from now on.your an official member of the Astronomy Club" I said and offer my hand

... interesting.

IT is VERY GOOD...................................................................................................... .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

just started..gonna wait for more chapters...

Well, the story is good. I like it. It is sad that the updates are very very not stable, but I see the potential in this story. It can go a long way.