the story at the beginning is really good, and interesting. The world building was decent and the mc is smart, and a little bit conniving. Everything is good until later on in the novel where then everything becomes kind of forced. Certain actions just don't make sense. one example of this is the character development of the mc from selfish loner(except his brother) to a somewhat caring and socialable guy. However, even with this change in personality he doesn't help others when it cost him nothing. like giving potatoes from his infinite potato shooter. I'm not saying that the mc should be a saint, but he actually gets benefits from doing this from the system which forces him to do good(sincere thanks helps him unlock OP weapons). The system itself just seem to stop working later on after the mc copy enough abilities and just doesn't trigger quests that much. Some situations are written in a forced way to make the mc act in a certain direction, which to me ruins the emersion of the novel. Even with these flaws I feel that this is a decent novel compared to others on this site, so check it out if you want.
the 1st half of story before ascension is good but after ascension this book is copy and paste of "most generous master ever " . Very disappointed for getting copy paste work .
Would you accept a a Loki/Arrowverse challenge,A Game of thrones challenge,A Star Wars Challenge, A Harry Potter challenge,a 100 Fanfiction Challenge,A Highschool DxD challenge,A Percy Jackson challenge?
a wonderful book which keeps u hooked from d very beginning. there r some similarities with extra's survival and author's pov but still it has it's own shinning points and hope author won't change that.. a good story with a protagonist who isn't bland or a naive kid but someone who knows what he's doing and has no moral bondings for his plans. keep up author, great job
I noticed some strange activity on Michael's phone when I was dealing with Brittany's situation. His phone had been on the same image for about thirty minutes. The image was the same picture that had been trending all night long, the one of Angela and Brittany. I wondered why he would just sit there and look at that picture for over half an hour so I turned on the camera to see what he was doing. My system almost overheated from second-hand embarrassment from what I saw.
Popular Reviews