The Neon Falls

Its really good so far but the writing quality or translation seems pretty lacking. There seems to be missing words or just sentences that dont make alot of sense. If there was an editor or proofreader Id say it was perfect but otherwise its lacking.

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I really like this story, but honestly you guys should go and **** yourselves, there's no way I'm going to try and continue to read through this ridiculous paywall. Especially considering how poor the update stability has been. Have fun losing half or more of the dedicated readership you guys had before you all became a bunch of money hungry cunts. The only way I'll continue to read this is if I can find the chapters somewhere else for free. Fuck off

Eu odiei a forma como o autor fez o par romântico do protagonista, odeio a forma como ele o fez fingir ser um garoto no começo pro meio, n gostei de como era a interação deles e como o autor colocava romance onde n deveria ter, pq até onde o protagonista sabia, o par dele era homem, n me entendam mal, n sou contra o relacionamento de pessoas de mesmo gênero, mas como leitor eu n consigo simpatizar, fora isso, a obra é incrível

Bro did you got inspired by  Overgeared novel your theme of starting chapters feel same as Overgeared............................................................................................................................................................................???

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Please Sensei, I'm confused on the ranking. Me: Whats better??? Ruby or Sapphire?!?!?! Also please fix it a bit since information is appearing in everywhere and i dont know how to read them properly since i dont know why

i wanted to review this but total kept reading and absolutely forget. I hope the thrill never stops. 😎