The Moon's Secret

Level: 1

"Oh? Do you not want to see your mother again? To see her happy and away from that bastard?" (Bai)

Suddenly he caught a feminine voice to his sense.

Can you please comment on how to make it better.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

I just read like 12 chapters and i just want to say I am a very picky reader an like action and bloodpumping scene from like get go 4-5 chapters but damn this novel just hooked me so hard I kept reading fist of all story was so fleshed I felt like I was reading the script of some nwe hit movie second mc character it showed just best for someone in his situation would behave and it didn't show  much about world background I think it will also be amazing I would suggest to most reader they should at least stick till free chapters.

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great story, added to library for a long time. author has made a huge milestone for a start, can't wait for more