The Moonlight Promise

A fresh twist on Billionaire Romance with a light-hearted tone, you will end up laughing numerous times. The interesting storyline and relatable characters would keep you turning pages too. You might want to turn on auto unlock on this book because every coin is worth it.  ----- Great Work, Author!

180+ chapters in  and here is my review starting with mc who is  extremely stupid sometimes arrogant and sometimes he thinks everything should be according to his will and he is also somewhat ungrateful . even though author emphasized many time that I lost count that he is mature in the story believe me he is not and if u say that he is only 14 yrs old and he has to be naive than stop calling him mature every other chapter bcz the life he had led should have made our mc mature but it only made him stupid. even though the mc has determination and he is hard-working I really dislike his thought process in many situations be it regarding his second soul bond be it regarding the time he had to endure pain while creating sub space or be it while taking others advice which he never takes bcz he is smart than others I guess this is what he thinks it looks like that to me don't know about others but yeah his thought process makes me think of him not as mc but your typical young masters. the only thing mc ever did not so stupid would be choosing artemis and i like that owl 🦉 more than mc. the way the MC character s developing I really don't know what it will be like and I don't think it will be any good the mc had already pushed me to edge an d if it keeps going on like this I will really drop this book. and yeah revenge is not something our mc thinks about its not like he has strength to do that and it's ok not to think about it untill he gets strong. well other than mc the everything in this novel is pretty good be it world backgroud or story or cultivation system and all. that's all for my review 🙂

Welcome to the story!This is not a shameless review by the author. I believe this novel deserves 5-star.You might say that every author thinks that way about his own story. And I think you are right but I want to put forward some pros and cons pointing out as to why it deserves 5-star.I won't be listing them separately as pros and cons as I believe that some points that might be cons for some readers might be pro for the other.1. The story revolves around a dystopia and unlike those many 'just dystopia' it indulges in not only the dangers and injustice but also the aftereffects of such a defective system and also how the residents are emotionally affected by such an environment. 2., Unlike other novels where MC is absolutely weak from the start or absolutely strong from the start (a bit too strong making a mess of the story where every problem is a problem only until MC arrives), this novel has an MC who is physically average at the beginning but has the mental fortitude of a killer. So you have it, weak from the outside strong from the inside. (this is only true in the beginning MC grow in strength)3. The story is mostly focused on the MC so there aren't multiple PoVs.4. The writing quality I believe is good enough.5. The story has a setting that is a mixture of occult literature and shinobi background.

Good stuff, maybe I haven't read a lot of other novels yet but this was quite good.I'm gonna recommend this to whoever is reading this review.

as soon as they stepped in the receiving hall they were met with a frightened girl which they quickly recognized as Yi Zhen, The mayors daughter, plopped on the corner staring blankly at a badly beaten corpse infront of her, streams of tears unstoppably flowing one of them approached her "Young miss! what happened here? who did this? where's the mayor?" he suddenly bombarded her with questions

"I was hoping that you could come to my debut. I know that your parents might not agree, but I would love if you could come."

"Oh, an arrogant mage. Not very original." She stated

He didn't know that he interrupted his Boss's tofu eating time, but the intense pressure in the living room already shows who was in here. Sobs!