The Mind God

Hi, guys sorry for the not posting for four days straight, I had an traffic accident, that was the reason I could not write and post,

Again, sorry about the I could not post chapters.

like most of this author, great story with great potential. but grammar and spelling is really bad. and the update stability started good, but crumbled recently.

- Work Days -

Monday - The Mind God

Tuesday - The Mind God

Wednesday - The Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

Thursday - The Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

Friday - The Mind God or Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

Sunday - Free-time or working on next book

the protagonist understands that humans are selfish even the "good" ones are selfish in the end, I like how the protagonist is going so far without a lot of boring girls to tease and he, he is not a virgin or an idiot who wants to stay  with the families of others and I like this lonely way of wanting to stay in the forest and everything, it would be incredible to create a domain only of magical beasts ... you are doing an incredible job if you continue like this.

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This story had a great start. The system was a little off, but could be corrected and improved over time. It did not get improved and only went downhill from there. The system seems to forget simple things. For example, it missed when the MC killed a three legged chicken and it did not update the Exp on it. It just randomly says, “you killed enough things to here’s a level or two”.

The character has many loopholes and for a character that is supposed to get smarter every level, he seems to forget simple things. One time he decides to kill two mages because, “although they are non hostile they provide a passive threat to me that could go off anytime”. The problem is that the MC forgot he has this power that can make people forget things and make them have illusions. He could have just made them forget any trace of him then put them under an illusion so they can’t see him or his traces.

Also the grammar is quite bad.

I must say though that this story had great potential. The way the character thought was in a unique way, a way I really liked (at first). The power he had was also unique.

A great book that had huge potential, that gave me more thoughts and an unique way of thinking. Poor execution though in my opinion.

It's really good and,give it a shot and it will definelitely catch your intention.Brion is improving good and the universe is written well.I expect great things from this novel.

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