The masochists

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You are so poor in story writing..  You keep on repeating one fact over and over again..  In a chapter only 2 - 3 character dialog..  I hate what u are doing to the character plot. Pls be creative..  I score you 1/10

As a fellow Nigerian, am supposed to rate the story well, abi??Ok to get to the matter Here's me being hones: This novel is absolutely wonderful.Both the characters and the story line everything is amazing.But I have one tiny problem with itThe MC.Aaron Wade as an MC is too...weak for me and I don't mean physically.To the point I've rea, he allows people to walk over him too muchHe doesn't act like the dark prince he is and he is way too infatuated with that Kira girl.I'd love the author to make the MC a bit more strong willedMm, I think that's all                      ,  .

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Really fun read with enjoyable characters. The story is also really compelling with a bit of a twist on the typical transmigration trope.

it's a first but it was good! I like the act of writing in first person perspective and the description was on a who picture scale. Author 😏 you've got to teach me some of your skills🤭🤭

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