I don't know know why the other reviews were like that, but this is how I write a review. An honest and constructive review.
Honestly the first story was compelling and intriguing as well. The background/setting was precisely describe. I could envisioned the exact place as if I was there with Megami.
There are some parts that bothers me though by just reading the piloting chapter/s. First: the proper use of quotation, which I commented at the chapter already. And next was during a dialogue, which I also left a comment there at the chapter.
A little polish will definitely give this book an edge since the story was catching.
I've never been a fan of fantasy, but this book has certainly made me a fan of it.
The starting words itself, had already captured my whole attention and eagerness. As I, the reader was already feeling the loneliness and fear Megami, the protagonist was feeling
The writer is surely a talented and skillful writer. I look forward to reading more of these thrilling chapters
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Honestly the first story was compelling and intriguing as well. The background/setting was precisely describe. I could envisioned the exact place as if I was there with Megami.
There are some parts that bothers me though by just reading the piloting chapter/s. First: the proper use of quotation, which I commented at the chapter already. And next was during a dialogue, which I also left a comment there at the chapter.
A little polish will definitely give this book an edge since the story was catching.
Keep it up.
Amazing work, honestly hard to find good books anymore.
The starting words itself, had already captured my whole attention and eagerness. As I, the reader was already feeling the loneliness and fear Megami, the protagonist was feeling
The writer is surely a talented and skillful writer. I look forward to reading more of these thrilling chapters