The book is overall good. Very good if i may add but the update stability is eating me from inside out. Also spoiler ahead..........There are some real narcissistic characters. I have seen 2 most obnoxious one. One is a political fiancé and another is his disciple who is a "God-King".The fiancé kind of later gets less obnoxious but still obnoxious. The disciple is getting some development.BUT The most despicable thing in this novel/book is that,THE MC/PROTAGONIST DOESN'T GET ANY FRICKING CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT.I can't express the frustration I have felt with the lack of character development with our character who is the focus of our novel.As much as i like the concept of this novel, if I can't see any character development it will amount to nothing later.Also considering the fact that this is the first novel of our dear author, the writing quality is way beyond i expected. The only 2 lacking thing is the update stability and the lack of character development.Hope Author will take this in a positive way and bring us delight through his arts.
Bagus, ceritanya menarik, apalagi saat membangun kotanya. Mungkin bisa lebih detail bentuk kotanya sperti apa? Jadi lebih pemasaran kelanjutan ceritanya
Probably the most decent among the new trials. There's some flaws in the translation but overall it's interesting.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Me after spending 100 coins on the book and giving it a Golden ticket.My coins: 0Do I have to say more.It's a really nice book and was worthy of the stuff.
First time doing a review but I gotta say this book is very interesting. Loved the world building so far and I'm already shipping the MC with the female childhood friend. All and all what I wanted to say is keep it up!~
Amazing story. I just love this book...one of my favorite stories. Eagerly wait for Sunday to read it. I hope Rishika will get happy ending. Keep it up 👍👍
Just a tip to the author. If you lock the chapters super early, no one will pay because no one will be invested in the characters. It also makes people not want to support your work because you make it seem like the only reason you write is for money.
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