This book is absolutely hilarious. I was cracking up on the first few chapters, the premise is quite unique as well, plenty of potential. The writing quality is quite high, very few grammatical mistake and a solid vocabulary. Definitely one to watch for the future!
I like the plot, unlike most transmigration novels, this one start when the MC is at a disadvantage. I love the overall humor of the story, can't wait for more.
I like how you outlined your character in a design that would be relatable to your readers. Personally, I love a main character that could make me feel something and that's what made me feel about him. Moreover, as I read through the novel, it was very easy to read, resembling a feel-good novel, the type that would give the readers a sense of relief and belonging, I guess?
I've read until chapter 2. Until now, I'm very intrigued at how he will carry out his life in this new world, not to mention, as a janitor. However, some sentences seem off-putting in terms of tenses. I suggest you be consistent with this one as this may distract your readers' attention in the novel. Regardless, to me, they aren't worth mentioning compared to the novel's premise itself. But still, work on them if you want to improve your writing skills further.
Overall, it's very interesting. I have already added this to my library and will read this in my free time! Good job, author! :)))
Love love love your story, very interesting and funny, continue writing and can't wait to read more. Would highly recommend this story to others
Yours truly SWBWG
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If you like cultivation novels this is the one for you!
It's engaging, creative and the author does a great job.
I especially loved the bonus chapters and the fact that the author goes above and beyond to publish more chapters after hitting milestones.
I've read until chapter 2. Until now, I'm very intrigued at how he will carry out his life in this new world, not to mention, as a janitor. However, some sentences seem off-putting in terms of tenses. I suggest you be consistent with this one as this may distract your readers' attention in the novel. Regardless, to me, they aren't worth mentioning compared to the novel's premise itself. But still, work on them if you want to improve your writing skills further.
Overall, it's very interesting. I have already added this to my library and will read this in my free time! Good job, author! :)))
Yours truly SWBWG